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I like it, I think it's got good rhythm and rhyme. Only thing I would change is the part where you repeat the word "angles" - I'd make it more... the same in pitch/speed I think. Also I'm not familiar with what it'd parodying.
I like the idea. Also the song type fits well. I think you should make those quiet sections shorter, though. Other than that I like it.
Not the first quiet part but the other two.
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