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Started by ordelore, March 30, 2016, 03:00:07 am

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Dudeman313

Does this qualify as a signature? 
The answer is "Sure."


DJ Omnimaga

I'm glad this is progressing. I didn't have time to read the two new chapters yet, so I'll read them later. :)

ordelore

April 28, 2016, 03:39:21 am #17 Last Edit: June 22, 2017, 09:31:52 pm by ordelore
I'm working on turning this into a more-readable html site.
Available at ordelore.github.io
Update:The domain expired.
Calc Wars is still alive (I hope)

DJ Omnimaga

I like the idea of making an HTML version. Nowadays people like to be able to access web content immediately rather than downloading a .doc file or opening one in an online document viewer :P

Have you written new chapters?

ordelore

Nothing new, homework is a pain. :(
Calc Wars is still alive (I hope)

DJ Omnimaga

Ah ok. Good luck with homework >.< (I hated homework a lot)

c4ooo

April 30, 2016, 08:44:49 pm #21 Last Edit: April 30, 2016, 08:47:55 pm by c4ooo
Nice work! Is this your first writing project?

However (this is just my opinion) the tone of the writing annoys me somehow :P

ordelore

Quote from: c4ooo on April 30, 2016, 08:44:49 pm
Nice work! Is this your first writing project?

However (this is just my opinion) the tone of the writing annoys me somehow :P

It's my first 'serious' writing project
The tone is kinda snarky on purpose, because that's my initial plan, but I may change that later because of feedback like the one you graciously gave
Calc Wars is still alive (I hope)

DJ Omnimaga

By snarky tone, do you mean less neutral about the story that is being told?

ordelore

Calc Wars is still alive (I hope)

DJ Omnimaga

Ah ok. I guess that could get to people who are very protective about their religion, especially if they're Christian.

Dudeman313

When you finish it, you could take it to AMG for publishing, and sell it in Lifeway or sonething.
Does this qualify as a signature? 
The answer is "Sure."


DJ Omnimaga

It depends. If they find such re-use of the bible offensive for whatever reason or not true enough to it, then perhaps they won't. But it depends what range of bible-related material they allow.

ordelore

May 18, 2016, 02:54:37 am #28 Last Edit: June 22, 2017, 09:32:30 pm by ordelore
Got a domain working for the website!
www.ordelore8x.me
Calc Wars is still alive (I hope)

Unicorn

Awesome! When I have more free time, I definitely will time reading this!



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